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There was a thud on top of the roof, huge claws came ripping through the ceiling; making their way to the back door. The three men shot at the ceiling in hopes of hitting whatever was attacking them, unfortunately in their fear they forgot that bullets bounce, and one had ricocheted; hitting the girl. She screamed out but was quickly silenced by jack with a hand over her mouth, as they looked around for the enemy silence remained.  But not for long as all the doors to the car were ripped off and something not human jumped on all the men, killing them instantly by snapping their necks.  I tried to sit up as blood was running through my shirt and down my side. I looked up at my savior, not really sure what else to call it. It looked towards me, its eyes holding me in place.

“We have come for you child” came a voice from outside the car.

I looked towards the voice, and saw a man standing wearing long robes, almost Jedi like. He face was young and emotionless. I heard shifting and I saw the creature moving towards me, I quickly tried to stand up, but only fell down from the dizziness created from loss of blood.

“Quickly seeker pick her up, we must be on our way and she is in need of medical attention.”

I struggled a little as this creature picked me up, but then no longer being able to keep awake I passed out.
©2008-2009 ~liquidfire101
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Author's Comments

okay just a little bit from chapter 2, still working on it. I'm also aware there is probably alot of grammar mistakes. so enjoy and let me know what you think of it so far.

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:iconblazingdarkwolf:
Tiny o.O

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Nom nom nom fish. FISH. FIIIIIIIIIIIISH.

Visceral: dealing with crude or elemental emotions
:iconliquidfire101:
tiny? as in not a long chapter?

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live today like there's no tomorrow.
i love my God who's my savior, bestest friend and my father. Get to know him, he's amazing!
:iconblazingdarkwolf:
yep

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Nom nom nom fish. FISH. FIIIIIIIIIIIISH.

Visceral: dealing with crude or elemental emotions
:iconliquidfire101:
oh If you read my comments, I said it was only part of ch.2.

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live today like there's no tomorrow.
i love my God who's my savior, bestest friend and my father. Get to know him, he's amazing!
:iconblazingdarkwolf:
Ahh that would make sense.

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Nom nom nom fish. FISH. FIIIIIIIIIIIISH.

Visceral: dealing with crude or elemental emotions
:iconliquidfire101:
hehe

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live today like there's no tomorrow.
i love my God who's my savior, bestest friend and my father. Get to know him, he's amazing!
:iconamaterasu-of-sunrise:
...But wheres ch 1?

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Howl to the moon, howl to the stars, howl away your sorrow and you will feel just like you stepped out of a spa!!!
:iconliquidfire101:
i don't think i ever posted chapter one.

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live today like there's no tomorrow.
i love my God who's my savior, bestest friend and my father. Get to know him, he's amazing!
:iconamaterasu-of-sunrise:
Ah, that could be why I cant find it XD

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Howl to the moon, howl to the stars, howl away your sorrow and you will feel just like you stepped out of a spa!!!

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